• Keep a writer’s journals for in-class exercises and homework assignments.
***Homework assignments will be turned in via your eBackpack account
• Share with partners and small groups.
• Read models from published and student work.
• Complete final, polished poems, stories, and essays.
• Come to class, with your journals, every day, on time.
• Write every day.
• Be willing to experiment and take risks as a writer.
• Share your writing and ideas with small and large groups. Support others who are sharing their work.
• Keep it fun.
• Push each student to a higher level of creativity and skill.
• Provide honest, supportive, and useful feedback on writing and be available for conferences.
• Be knowledgeable and well-prepared.
We will read many examples of effective, interesting, and thought-provoking poems, memoirs, short stories, essays, and writing about writing.
We will write in our journals every day. They will be our workbooks, our play space, our place to whine, laugh, discover, practice, make mistakes, experiment.
For your journals, you may use:
1. A spiral notebook
2. A fancy-dancy journal
3. A small, three-ringed binder (especially if you want to type some entries).
• Every day, when we arrive in class, we will warm up with a freewrite–called a BOP (Beginning Of the Period freewrite)–the topic will be on the board each day.
• Generally, we will do in-class writing exercises, also in our journals.
• Usually, you will have a journal assignment for homework, which should take no longer than twenty minutes (at lease a page).
Every several weeks, you will turn in polished, final pieces, many culled from your journals. You will have the opportunity to write:
• Memoir or Personal Essay
• First Person Narrative
• An experimental final project
Grading: (See Grading Rubric)
Each polished piece of writing will be evaluated on the 8 point scale. Journals can earn a maximum of 4 points. You will also be evaluated on effort, contribution to class, and self-reflection: Do you show up to class every day? Do you come on time? Do you give your writing time and attention? Do you begin your drafts early enough that you have time to receive meaningful feedback from others on your work? Do you rewrite your papers? Do you participate in class? How well do you contribute to our classroom community? Are you willing to meet new people, include others in your group, give meaningful feedback, and support others in taking risks? Can you explain your writing process, acknowledge your strengths, and identify your areas of growth? (See separate grading rubric.)
Tardies: Being on time to creative writing is important. We will generally open the class with a reading and a freewrite–and late people disrupt our concentration and creative process. If you are late, sign in at the door and go to your desk as quietly as possible. Chronically late students will be assigned Saturday School.
Cell Phones: Texting during class makes your teacher weep. First, she feels bad about herself because you are sending her the message that she is boring. But even if she is boring, from boredom is born creativity! If we are always filling our minds—with texts, phone calls, videos, music–we will never have the opportunity to experience the creativity that bursts after a period of dullness. For this reason also no listening to music unless the teacher specifically invites you.
Food: Oh no you didn’t!!
Late work: No late work. (See late work policy to be signed by you and your family.)
Rewrite policy: If you would like to rewrite your papers, you may turn them in (or make an appointment for a conference) within a week of the day it was returned.
Requesting a meeting: Send me an email with all the times you can meet. Include lunches, after school, and prep times. Occasionally your email with end up in my junk mail, so if you don’t hear back from me within a day, talk to me.
*You may not turn in late papers for a grade, but you may turn them in for credit and keep your overall grade from falling a letter. You might not receive written comments.
**If you have an excused absence the day journals are due, you will earn a grade, but might not get written comments.
The majority of your grade is determined by your paper and journal grades. Your grade can move up or down a half a letter grade (or a little more), based on the other elements on the rubric.
All papers should be typed, doubled spaced, and include your name and a title. After five grammar errors (marked with checkmarks in the margin of your paper), your grade will go down no more than one number. For the skills we have been focusing on for each unit, look at the checklist on your assignment sheet and self-evaluation.
8/A You have chosen a topic that interests, challenges, or amuses you emotionally and/or intellectually. Your title captures your reader’s attention and informs the piece. Your writing has a focus; your structure serves the purpose of the piece; your pacing is effective. Your writing voice is fresh, distinct, and consistent. Where they enrich the story, you have used specific detail, sense detail, scenes, and active verbs. Your opening engages; your ending satisfies. You have used paragraph breaks intelligently. Something happens in your piece: either the character or reader is somehow different at the end of the piece than at the beginning. The writing flows, and the reader is not distracted from your content by grammatical issues.
5/B You have done all of the above with a few areas that need strengthening (i.e. developing scenes, deciding which sections of the story to slow down and expand and which to summarize, developing characters with detail and dialogue, weaving in the setting, etc.)
2/C The writing feels rushed or unfinished. May summarize plot instead of bringing the story alive with scenes, sense and specific details, and dialogue. The characters or plots may be stereotypes (from movies, TV shows, video games.) The piece may lack a clear focus. Lack of paragraphing/grammatical issues detract from content.
0 No credit. Not finished, rushed, sloppy, incomplete.
Unit One: Tool Box (January 2017)
Gain tools for our writer’s tool-box!
We will experience writing as play and begin to build our foundational skills. We will brainstorm, free write, list free write, focus free write, and cluster. We will play with strategies for accessing memories and practice using sense and specific details. We will begin to write in scenes and practice shaping a story. We will become comfortable sharing work with one another and practice giving meaningful feedback.
“Let yourself go. Pull out from the depths those thoughts you do not understand and spread them in the sunlight and know the meaning of them.” E.M. Forester
• Write an email to your future self and received it on the date you choose: Future Me.
• Watch a focused free write-like video on forks, One Word: Contemporary Writers on the Words They Love or Loathe.
• Watch slam poet Sarah Kaye perform her piece on hands.
7 -MINUTE AUTOBIOGRAPHY:
• Read a model of a Random Autobiography.
• Find a name for a character with a Random Name Generator.
• Find an international or historical name for a character with Behind the Name random name generator. (Thanks, Margaret!)
• Find names for pets with this Pet Name Database and Generator.
• Find out how many people in the United States have your name at HowManyofMe.com.
• Read a name poem by Billy Collins: Cemetery Ride.
• Read a name prose poem by Sandra Cisneros: My Name.
• Read the first few pages of a book in which the characters are defined by their nicknames: We Were the Mulvaneys.
• Challenge yourself to write a story with given elements with the random story generator. (Thanks, Margaret!)
• Let The Story Starter randomly generate the first line of your story.
• Try this Random Plot Generator. (Thanks, Yuki!)
Relive childhood memories with these videos:
SENSE AND SPECIFIC DETAIL:
• Read an article on how sense and specific detail effect the brain: Why Description Matters to the Brain.
**this writing is tough! With descriptive words, turn this sentence into something positive: “Sticks and stones may break my bones”. Use each work in a “positive” way. Here is an example: “I love the way sticks break under my hiking boots during a hike in the woods”.
• Watch the TED talk: The Power of Introverts.
If you are an introvert, tell us about how you interact with the world around you when you want to be alone.
If you are an extrovert, tell us how you deal with those who are quiet and introspective.
JUST FOR FUN:
• Find out which famous author your work most resembles: I Write Like.
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Unit Two: Poetry (February 2017)
At the end of this unit, we will participate in a “Poetry Out Loud”competition. Our school-wide competition is Thursday, March 2nd, 2017. State finals are March 6th. National finals are April 25-26, 2017 at George Washington University. We have got a lot more info to share… STAY TUNED!
UNIT GOALS: In this brief introduction to poetry, we will read many marvelous models which we will use as prompts. We will also practice playing with sound, writing with structure, using images and metaphor, and incorporating the creative writing skills we have already mastered such as using sense and specific details, incorporating scenes, experimenting with fictional voices, and weaving in dialogue.
PLAYING WITH WORDS:
A rhyme-finding site: Write Rhymes
An anagram-finding site: Wordsmith
POEMS TO READ:
Read great poems for teenagers at Poets.org.
Check out books of poetry from the Gunn library.
Read a new contemporary poem every day at Poetry Daily.
Read, hear, or watch video of your favorite poets at Poetry Foundation.
Read or hear audio recordings of thousands of well-known poets, and sign up to receive a daily poem at Poets.org.
For those particularly passionate about poetry, read the poetry blogs at the Poetry Society of America.
POEMS TO WATCH:
Watch Animated poems by Billy Collins.
Watch and post your own poetry videos: Moving Poems.
Visit the YouTube channel Button Poetry
Write a poem in the form of a text message: Cellpoems.
Read examples of found poems: The Found Poetry Review.
Submit poems that are no more than 20 words and 4 lines at Four and Twenty.
POEMS WE WILL PROBABLY DISCUSS IN CLASS:
Listen to poet Kim Addonizio read her poem “What Do Women Want?”
Listen to poet Gwendolyn Brooks read “We Real Cool.”
Listen to Sharon Olds Read “I Go Back to May 1937.”
Read Billy Collin’s partially found poem “Victoria’s Secret.”
Join a Bay Area haiku society: Yuki Teikie Haiku Society
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Unit Three: Memoir and Personal Essay (March 2017)
We will practice strategies for accessing memories and generating ideas, explore a variety of story structures, practice the use of specific and sense detail, and further develop our abilities to write in scenes. We will introduce the concept of voice. We will refine our skills in giving and receiving meaningful feedback.
• To inspire your “Here I . . . ” poem to go with your place map, read this poem by Galway Kinnell, The Road Between Here and There.
RECENT WONDERFUL STUFF:
• From This American Life, a moving story about a Chinese-American boy, who doesn’t speak Chinese, finally connecting with his Chinese father, who doesn’t speak English, from Show 567.
• Listen to an interview with famous memoir writing Mary Carr, about her writing and new book The Art of Memoir.
• On The Moth, listen to a child soldier from Sierra Leone tell stories about trying to adjust to his new life as a teenager in New York City – powerful story!
IN CLASS READINGS
• Fishcheeks by Amy Tan
• A Litany by Gregory Orr
• Read fabulous short non-fiction at Brevity.
• Read samples of memoirs or submit your own to Hippocampus.
• Listen to true stories, shared, live at the Moth.
INNOVATIVE FORMS FOR MEMOIRS:
• Lists. Read an example of a memoir in the form of a list: The Things I’ve Lost.
• Six Words. Write and submit six-word memoirs: Six Words.
MEMOIR IDEAS AND ADVICE:
• Inspiration and ideas for writing your memoir by writer Abigail Thomas: How to Write Your Memoir.
• Advice for memoir writing by writer and professor Susan Shapiro: Make me Worry You are Not Okay.
• Watch the documentary Stories We Tell (streaming on Netflix), an example of innovative structure with reflection on the difficulty of finding truth, as the filmmaker tries to solve mysteries about her mother.
PUBLICATION (See more under our “Publications Opportunities” link):
• Publish your memoir and essays in the new high school non-fiction literary magazine sponsored by the well-known journal Riverteeth: Tributary.
• Submit to Real Simple magazine’s “Your Words” column.
• Submit to Real Simple magazine’s yearly “Life Lessons” contest.
• Write an essay for the radio show This I Believe.
• Submit a short non-fiction piece about an experience on an airplane: Airplane Reading.
• Write and submit six-word memoirs: Six Words.
• Submit memoir to Hippocampus.
• Submit your non-fiction, on themes, to The Sun’s Reader’s Write column.
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|Roses by Emily Levine.docx
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Unit Four: First Person Narrative (April 2017)
We will focus on developing first-person fictional narrative. We will play with strategies for generating original and memorable characters, explore how to find our characters’ stories, learn how to focus our story by creating an imaginary audience, and practice writing in a variety of voices. We will apply our new skill sets to giving even more meaningful feedback to one another.
FIND AN IDEA: (Also visit our Inspiring Resources link!)
• Read the literary magazine The Good Ear for examples of monologues.
• Write from point of view of a character from one of these photographs.
• Write a story inspired by an urban legend.
• Write a story in which a character has an unusual fear. See the Phobia List.
EXAMPLES OF VOICES OF INANIMATE OBJECTS:
• Model of a first-person narrative from the point of view of an inanimate object: Marcel the Shell with Shoes On
• Trailer for a movie with an inanimate object as a main character: Rubber
• Silent video from the point of view of a falling meteor: Fallen (Thanks, Daniel!)
EXAMPLES OF CHILDREN’S VOICES:
• Read the first couple of pages of Room, by Emma Donoghue, narrated by a five-year-old boy.
• Read the first couple of pages of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime, by Mark Haddon, narrated by an autistic boy.
• Read the first chapter of Because of Winn-Dixie, by Kate DiCamillo, narrated by a ten-year old girl.
EXAMPLES OF DOG’S VOICES:
• Watch a video or read an excerpt from the first chapter of The Art of Racing in the Rain, by Garth Stein.
• Read the short story “After I Was Thrown in the River and Before I Drown,” by Dave Eggers.
• Read the first pages of A Dog’s Life, by Peter Mayle.
OTHER FUN VOICES:
• Read I Love Girl, by Simon Rich, a love story in the voice of a teenage caveman.
FOCUSING YOUR FIRST PERSON NARRATIVE:
• An employee in an office gives an orientation to a new employee in the short story “Orientation.” Listen to it on the radio show This American Life (Act 4).
• A bitter woman writes her Christmas letter in “Season Greetings to our Friends and Family!!” by David Sedaris. Listen to This American Life. (Warning–offensive point of view!)
• An obsessed man writes a series of letters to his ex-girlfriend in the humor piece, “Dear Amanda,” by Steve Martin. Or listen to Steve Martin read it.
FIRST PERSON NARRATIVES THAT ARE SHORT, BUT STILL HAVE MOVEMENT:
• Read The Custodian by Brian Hinshaw (posted below under Bonus materials).
• Visit our Publications Opportunity link.
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Unit Five: Dialogue (May 1-15, 2017)
We will clarify what should be included in a scene with dialogue and what should be summarized. We will learn to make our dialogue more interesting and effective by giving character’s distinct voices, providing them conflicting or hidden agendas, trapping them emotionally or physically, and using subtext. We will continue to work on effective pacing of stories and refine how we begin and end our stories.
For hints on using speaker tags effectively, visit this great blog Eight Tips for Using Dialogue Tags.
• Read an example of a dialogue between two unlikely characters: Julie and the Warlord.
• Watch funny examples of dialogue between terrible therapist and her clients: WebTherapy.
• Watch funny interaction between teacher and student: “I’m Worried About My Grade.”
• Read dialogue between MacBeth and MacDuff, by a former Gunn student.
• For a great model of using mannerisms and gestures to reveal feelings, read Tobias Wolff’s “Say Yes.”
• For a beautiful example of power shifting, read Langston Hugh’s Thank You Ma’am. (Also, see Mel’s story below.)
• Visit our Publications Opportunity link.
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Final Project and Experimental Writing (May 15-19, 2017)
As part of your final, show us what you got! Choose one piece from your journal to expand on and polish. This is part 1 of your final. For part 2, yep, you gotta keep reading!
In the optional final project, students have the opportunity to do a significant revision of a previous piece or create new work of their choice. Students are encouraged to experiment with innovative, genre-bending forms.
EXAMPLES OF INNOVATIVE FORMS:
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